中考英语辅导:给奶奶的一封信-中考英语作文 - 范文欣赏
Dear grandma 下一篇:读〈钢铁是怎样炼成的〉有感
How's it going? I got my repord card today. All my grade was good except English.My English grade was disappointing. She said I was a lazy student, Which isn't true?I had a really hard time with English this semester, It's just that I find English test really difficult. So I don't think I was lazy, but I will do better with my writing. At last, I hope you are in good health and tell me sister's grade.
Love
Betty 文章来源于作文网zuoww.cn,版权归原创作者所有。共有 4 人参与点评,平均得分:92 分
字数比较少,有点不符作文要求.以后继续努力.我顶
[点评人]:李丽明 打分:90 分 发表时间:2009-1-28 16:49:10
恩不错。有我当年的一半风范!!继续努力吧、、、、、
[点评人]:吴建成 打分:90 分 发表时间:2009-1-28 16:44:03
虽然写的好,但是字数有点短。一般教师都先看看字数,再看字迹。所以字数很重要!!知道不????
[点评人]:张昕 打分:100 分 发表时间:2009-1-13 14:17:48
你写的很好,祝你写的更好.goodluck.
